i think this is pretty ok for a first animation (looks better than my first one heh)
you should try adding backgrounds and a few inbetweens for your next one

Awesome ideas and really good visuals! I sat through it, like i was watching a saturday morning cartoon as a kid :D. Altho the narrating voice wasn't my favourite, still great work.

being inspired by another game is one thing, but copying the game, changing one tiny aspect of it and then calling it yours is another