In my opinion, the drawings were nice, but the animation was almost all puppetry. I did like the simple backgrounds and how the chars' eyes moved around a lot.
The joke would've been good, but it was way too dragged out. Also i know the scenes with the drawing girl were part of the comedy, but i felt like they could've been left out completely (except the last bit with her)
All in all i think this wasn't bad considering it's only your 3rd animation :d