In my opinion, the drawings were nice, but the animation was almost all puppetry. I did like the simple backgrounds and how the chars' eyes moved around a lot.
The joke would've been good, but it was way too dragged out. Also i know the scenes with the drawing girl were part of the comedy, but i felt like they could've been left out completely (except the last bit with her)
All in all i think this wasn't bad considering it's only your 3rd animation :d
i think this is pretty ok for a first animation (looks better than my first one heh)
you should try adding backgrounds and a few inbetweens for your next one
yeah, as it is probably apparent, a lot of this was experimenting with different techniques, spleening, animating frame by frame, lip syncing etc. etc. i plan on polishing off my future works waaayy more
Awesome ideas and really good visuals! I sat through it, like i was watching a saturday morning cartoon as a kid :D. Altho the narrating voice wasn't my favourite, still great work.
being inspired by another game is one thing, but copying the game, changing one tiny aspect of it and then calling it yours is another
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